Information report about Saturn.

Information Report

Success Criteria

Clear categories with subtitles	Self	LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction
Use sentences and paragraphs
Use facts to inform the reader
Use different sentence starters
Use VCOP

Start writing here…

            Saturn

                        Introduction

Have you ever want to know more information about Saturn.This is a good information report for you!

                                Appearances

Saturn is a beautiful planets,also you can not go to that planets because there is no air in Saturn.Did you know that Saturn is the brighter planets in the solar system??? The rings is made out of rock and ice.

                                      Size

Did you know that Saturn is the second biggest planet in the solar system, Saturn orbits the sun and it orbits itself.Saturn is very light and some people say that if you got a big enough bucket and saturn fell in the bucket saturn would float on the water in the bucket.

                                    Colour

Many people explore the colour of Saturn,the colour is like yellow and rainbow colour (some of them,Yellowish brown)In Saturn it has  liquid gas.

                                    Rings

The ring is made out of ice crystals and in Saturn it like a destiny,it’s yellow and dusty.The rings is so amazing to see,you can see it because it is brighter to see it without a  telescope. Saturn is named for the Roman god Saturn,and know for the Greek.

Saturn has many rings around Saturn,may planets has rings,but you can not see them,only Saturn.

                         conclusion

Saturn is a nice planet,I learn many things about Saturn.I hope you like my report about Saturn!

Skip counting to solve multiplication problems

In Flox class I have been learning to solve multiplication problems. Check out my first go at using explain everything to share my learning.

100 Word Challenge

This week we tried out the 100 Word Challenge.

WALT write a descriptive story in only 100 words!

The 100 word challenge is a challenge to write a whole story in only 100 words! You can check how many words you have written by highlighting your writing and pressing Ctrl, Shift, C at the same time. Good luck!

Make sure you think about your story and read it to yourself when you have finished to check it is as good as it can be!

Your prompt this week is:

I will be successful when:	Self	LB
I have used 100 words	yes
my writing makes sense	yes
have at least 1 complex sentence	yes
have used full stops and capital letters, and one other form of punctuation (! , “ “ )	yes

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First use the complex sentence planner to start your writing.

Begin writing here:

The girl was getting some food from the trees,once when the bird came the little girl was so scared that she needs to run back home.When she run back home the bird catches her when she was running.After that the bird had to stop,because his mother said ‘’“ his mum said come here or you go and get some food for us”.When it was nearly night time the bird was gone when the girl was sleeping outside the backyard  of the house,When it was morning the girl said where is the bird, her mum said it was a dream.

Word count:105

My name in New Zealand sign Language

This week we have been learning some sign language in Flox class.This is the link  to my name in sign  language NZSL.

Can you sign your name?

Interesting fact

Hi my name is Cicilia and this is an audio recording about me.

https://drive.google.com/open?id=0Bw4gbge6p1JqaWRzTFNHUEN6REE&authuser=0

I love to use the voice recorder because it more easy to write. 

Anzac letters from the soldiers