Thursday, 26 November 2015

WALT:Use Precise Nouns To Add Detail For Our Reader.

This week we been learning about Precise nouns.Nouns is a naming word,Precise means other words than the old words.

Here is a example:

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping Kmart with my Mum. We went to the shop diary to get some food KFC. We also went to look for a present bike for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll Babier and a soft toy Bear. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes T-shirts, I got two new items Converse and a pair of shoes Adidas . Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop Kmart to buy an ice block Cookie cream. Lucky me!


  1. Morena Cicilia,

    I like the way that you have checked your writing probably and made sure that it made sense.So you can be a better writer.On thing Cicilia you need to check is how to spell is barbie not babier.

    Ka Kite

    From Hulita

    1. Thanks Hulita,and also can you check your comment.


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